First Scene Screenplay Festival
Jean Barker (EDEN)
I feel any feedback is better than none, so that’s why I picked this one. I also think having your project read out loud by actors is very useful. My initial feelings were defensive because the reader mentioned or referred to certain “rules” (there aren’t really any) regarding style. That said, much of the feedback was useful and has now been incorporated. Thank you!
Genre: Horror, Fantasy, Romance
A teenage girl who grew up in a cult based on the biblical myth of Eden falls in love with an intruder from the sinful world outside the garden walls.
Judith: Zena Driver
Narrator: Val Cole
Edie: Amrit Kaur
John: Jolly Amoako